Week 7 discussion
DQ1 Revision Techniques
Part 1: You will want to choose a paragraph that includes a
quotation. Review any feedback you received on it. Revise accordingly. For
example, you may have to shorten a quotation or use a stronger signal phrase.
You may have to move the quotation to a different place in the paragraph.
Per the information provided in the reading for Week 7, look
carefully at the quotation to identify keywords in it that you can use in a
paraphrase of the quotation. Part of your revision should include revision
where you include paraphrase and use of the keyword.
Post your revised paragraph here. To help set the context
for your paragraph, post your thesis statement.
Include a note explaining your revision process: what you
revised and why, including how you revised the quotation. If you do not have
any quoted material in the paragraph, post a quotation and a revision as a
As youâre revising your paragraphs for content, consider the
comments you received on Paper 1 for the development of your paragraphs.
Consider how that feedback may apply to Paper 2. For instance, if you received
a notation about stronger development, be sure to review Paper 2 for any areas
that may need stronger development. Or if you received feedback that your topic
sentences could be stronger, make sure that the topic sentences are clearly
stated in Paper 2.
Part 2: You also will need to write a conclusion for your
paper this week. Review the material on conclusions in Week 4, and any comments
you may have received on your conclusion in Paper 1. Look for ways to revise
the conclusion from Paper 1 to match your newly developed Paper 2. You can post
your conclusion in your discussion posting to receive feedback on it.
When you post your paragraph, please also post the thesis of
your paper. Thank you.
DQ2 Revision Strategies and your Writing Process
Consider how you have developed revisions strategies as a
result of working through your papers for this course.
Has anything changed? Do you write and/or edit your writing
What revision strategies will you be using in future writing
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